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 ## every noise at once
 [https://everynoise.com/](https://everynoise.com/)
 
-scatter plot of every recorded spotify genre. charted with a fuzzy calibration; mechanical / electronic feel on the vertical axis, smoothness on the horizontal axis. really useful for finding similar artists based on one that you enjoy
+scatter plot of every recorded spotify genre. charted with a fuzzy calibration; mechanical / electronic feel on the vertical axis, smoothness on the horizontal axis. really useful for finding similar artists based on ones that you enjoy
 
 <a href="https://everynoise.com/"><img src="/_assets/img/cool_links/everynoise.jpg"/></a>
 
 ## pc98 images
 [https://www.pc98.org/main.html](https://www.pc98.org/main.html)
 
-in the early 80s, sega, nintendo and atari had a stranglehold on the videogame market, and by extension, the kinds of games that could easily be distributed to the public. the pc-9800 series of japnaese personal computers it allowed people to bypass publication requirements for other systems and make whatever a developer could dream up (within the physical limitations of the hardware). this caused a bit of a renaissance of extremely slick pixel art productions, and this site records the vast majority. also check out [thor high heels' video](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OVpX2y6KjwA) on the pc-98 for some more eye candy
+in the early 80s, sega, nintendo and atari had a stranglehold on the videogame market, and by extension, the kinds of games that could easily be distributed to the public. the pc-9800 series of japanese personal computers allowed people to bypass publication requirements for other systems and make whatever a developer could dream up (within the physical limitations of the hardware). this caused a bit of a renaissance of extremely slick pixel art productions, and this site records the vast majority. also check out [thor high heels' video](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OVpX2y6KjwA) on the pc-98 for some more eye candy
 
 <a href="https://www.pc98.org/main.html"><img src="/_assets/img/cool_links/pc98.jpg"/></a>
 
 ## ffilccoo
 [https://pgrkbd.web.fc2.com/](https://pgrkbd.web.fc2.com/)
 
-your average pre-2015 mechanical keyboard enthusiast. you can tell this dude really cares about the holistic aesthetic of the mid-80s mechanical keyboard and what makes them unique over the more capitalist focused modern offerings
+your average pre-2015 mechanical keyboard enthusiast. you can tell they really cares about the holistic aesthetic of the mid-80s mechanical keyboard and what makes them unique over the more capitalist focused modern offerings
 
 <a href="https://pgrkbd.web.fc2.com/"><img src="/_assets/img/cool_links/filco.jpg"/></a>
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